Peer Reviews

Online Presentation Peer Review for Onwuka by Carmen Tucker No, I would not consider the title of her presentation creative; however, it does offer the audience a preview of the presentation’s content. The title should be something more exciting, rather than a general...

Built Environment Description 1

Objective: At Morehouse College, the central campus, specifically, I observe the area at 1:45 PM. At this time, men of Morehouse College are transitioning between classes, all held in brick, old-fashioned buildings. These African-American men of different skin...

Revision Analysis for BEA

I  revised my BEA because it contained all the necessary components except the actual analysis part. All I did was state the evidence and research I found, but I didn’t analyze the research into my own words; I didn’t provide my opinion that has been drawn...

Revision Analysis for AB 1

I revised my first AB because it was lacking evidence to support the claims that were being made. Instead of providing evidence, I just stated claims and facts found from my research. I didn’t take my research to the next level by providing evidence from the...

Revision Analysis for BED’s

I revised both of my BED’s because they were both lacking substance in order to really description the space I was in.  I needed to go more in depth both objectively and subjectively about what I was experiencing, why I was experiencing what I was experiencing,...
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